I was tagged by the lovely Nicki Elson for the WIP Blog Tour. And since it's been a bit since I last posted anything about my writing, I figured this was as a good time as any to let you guys know a bit about Fate's Awakening, my WIP. Also, in case you don't know, WIP stands for "work in progress". Yes, I still count FA as a WIP, because it's not published, and, in fact, is being critiqued mercilessly by Shelley Greene at this time.
Anyway...
The rules of the to:
1) Link back to the person who tagged you. That would be Nicki Elson, so check out her blog here.
Okay, so far so good.
2) Write a little about and give the first sentences of the first 3 chapters of a WIP.
Here's the blurb I've tentatively settled on for Fate's Awakening.
Jack Harris's reluctance to find The One has put his life in danger with the Fates. They send a young goddess to convince Jack that he needs to search his heart or he's going to lose his only chance at happiness. After the goddess gives him less than a month to get his act together, Jack realizes that his soul mate is his long-time roommate and best friend, Andrew Kelly. Problem is, Andy's in a relationship with a woman, and Jack can't quite figure out where they stand. Will the goddess's divine intervention be enough to help Jack? Or will the Fates have to cut the tangled thread of his life when the deadline comes?
Intrigued? I hope so.
And here are the first sentences from the first 3 chapters of Fate's Awakening...four, actually, because I did a prologue. So you guys get a bonus sentence! Woo hoo!
Prologue: "The Three have requested your immediate presence."
Chapter 1: "Your place or mine?"
Chapter 2: Insistent banging roused me from a deep sleep.
Chapter 3: Just after eight-thirty, my cab pulled up in front of the bar.
And finally, rule 3: Tag 4 more writers to see what they're up to!
Shelley Greene
Jennifer DeLucy
Debra Anastasia
and
Rumer Haven
I can't wait to see what they're up to!
xoxo Sarah
Follow me on my journey to become a published author. I am a professional editor and an aspiring writer of both novels and short stories.
Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Monday, October 27, 2014
Auction ends tonight!
Hey, ladies and gents! There's an auction going on right now to help support the Maryland Romance Writers, and there are some great things up for grabs. Anything from signed books to gift baskets to knitwear to critiques to a tutorial on Scrivener writing software.
The auction ends TONIGHT at 9PM EDT, so get your bids in before it's too late!
http://www.32auctions.com/organizations/15633/auctions/17346?reset_filter=1
xoxo Sarah
Thursday, October 2, 2014
Tips for Editing Your Manuscript from a Real-Life Editor, Part 7
Part 1: Look it up!
Part 2: Read it out loud.
Part 3: Have someone who knows what they're doing read it.
Part 4: Consistency, consistency, consistency!
Part 5: Dialogue tag...you're NOT it!
Part 6: Pick the right word to say what you mean.
This is part 7: Adverbs--Kill it with fire!
Or, as Stephen King says in On Writing: "The road to hell is paved with adverbs."
That might sound like a little extreme, but trust me, adverbs are not your friend. What's an adverb? It's basically the equivalent of what an adjective is to a noun, but it's a word that describes or modifies another adverb, adjective or, most commonly, a verb--how something is done. Often--but not always--they end in "ly".
He walked slowly. How did he walk? Slowly.
She talked quietly. How did she talk? Quietly.
You get the idea.
So what's the problem with adverbs? Description is good, right? And I'm always on everyone about showing, not telling (*maniacal laughter* You just wait...there'll be an entry in this series on that too, I can guarantee it).
The problem with adverbs is that there's almost always a better word to use that makes your narrative stronger. See all those words in bold and italics? I even went overboard with the emphasis so you guys would know I'm serious.
And since I'm so big on showing, not telling, I'm gonna show you. Read the following two narrative paragraphs, and pick the stronger one...
Kylie quietly walked through the house. She'd waited patiently all day for her family to leave. Now, Kylie finally had the computer all to herself. She firmly pressed the button and switched it on, fidgeting excitedly as it slowly booted. The web browser opened suddenly, and Kylie meticulously poked in the address. Yay! Kylie thought happily. Now I can immediately watch my favorite cat videos!
Kylie tip-toed through the house. She'd waited all day for her family to leave. Now, Kylie had the computer all to herself. She pressed the button and switched it on, fidgeting as it booted. The web browser opened, and Kylie poked in the address. Yay! Kylie thought. Now I can watch my favorite cat videos!
The second one is stronger, more direct, and clearer, and that's with only changing one of the adverbs (quietly walked to tip-toed) and just deleting the others. Even better would be to find ways of showing even more using other, stronger, words.
Here's what I mean by that:
Said quietly becomes whispered.
Walked slowly becomes strolled.
By using a single word (or a short phrase) in place of the adverb, it provides a more direct description of what's happening and makes it clearer to the reader.
This post with a giant quote from Stephen King's On Writing, where he talks dandelions in your word-garden and closing the door firmly, takes the cake. Go read it. I'll be watching Nyan Cat until you're done...
...
Back already? Good.
Oh, and like the awesome Mr. King says, for the love of Jesus on a Velociraptor, please don't use them with dialogue tags. For 99% of the time, let the dialogue communicate how someone says something. For the other 1%...well, I guess I can let it slide.
"Fine, Mom, but as soon as I'm done cleaning my room, I'm gonna watch cat videos again," Kylie saiddully.
See what I did there? I crossed out the adverb. Why? Because you don't need it. It's clear from the dialogue that Kylie is whining (you could, in theory, use "whined" as the dialogue tag instead of "said", but, again, it's not necessary--her tone is already clear to the reader, and readers aren't stupid).
There are ways around using them, too. Is it recommended? Well, that probably depends on what you're trying to accomplish with the description...
"Of course you'd want to watch cat videos instead of eating pizza with me," Jen saidscathingly.
"Of course you'd want to watch cat videos instead of eating pizza with me," Jen snapped.
Is it easy to tell from the dialogue that the words are said "scathingly"? Maybe, maybe not. But in cases like this, it'd be your call whether to use an adverb or not. Better yet, change "said" to "snapped" or something like I did. It's not one of those dialogue tags that's too "out there", and it effectively communicates what you're trying to get across about how Jen is saying something.
Let me also say that I'm a huge fan of adverbs...in a first draft. Mine are littered with them. But, because this is an editing how-to tip post thingy, I feel I should emphasize that I try my best to catch them and weed them out (haha, get it? Weed them out? Like dandelions? You'd get it if you read the Stephen King bit above...), replacing the adverbs with stronger language or taking them out completely. So feel free to let your first-draft garden get a bit overgrown...you'll be taking some Round-Up to it when the second draft comes along.
Are you guys finding these posts useful? What are your thoughts on adverbs? Please let me know in the comments. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Part 2: Read it out loud.
Part 3: Have someone who knows what they're doing read it.
Part 4: Consistency, consistency, consistency!
Part 5: Dialogue tag...you're NOT it!
Part 6: Pick the right word to say what you mean.
This is part 7: Adverbs--Kill it with fire!
Or, as Stephen King says in On Writing: "The road to hell is paved with adverbs."
| Apply adverbs here... |
That might sound like a little extreme, but trust me, adverbs are not your friend. What's an adverb? It's basically the equivalent of what an adjective is to a noun, but it's a word that describes or modifies another adverb, adjective or, most commonly, a verb--how something is done. Often--but not always--they end in "ly".
He walked slowly. How did he walk? Slowly.
She talked quietly. How did she talk? Quietly.
You get the idea.
So what's the problem with adverbs? Description is good, right? And I'm always on everyone about showing, not telling (*maniacal laughter* You just wait...there'll be an entry in this series on that too, I can guarantee it).
The problem with adverbs is that there's almost always a better word to use that makes your narrative stronger. See all those words in bold and italics? I even went overboard with the emphasis so you guys would know I'm serious.
And since I'm so big on showing, not telling, I'm gonna show you. Read the following two narrative paragraphs, and pick the stronger one...
Kylie quietly walked through the house. She'd waited patiently all day for her family to leave. Now, Kylie finally had the computer all to herself. She firmly pressed the button and switched it on, fidgeting excitedly as it slowly booted. The web browser opened suddenly, and Kylie meticulously poked in the address. Yay! Kylie thought happily. Now I can immediately watch my favorite cat videos!
Kylie tip-toed through the house. She'd waited all day for her family to leave. Now, Kylie had the computer all to herself. She pressed the button and switched it on, fidgeting as it booted. The web browser opened, and Kylie poked in the address. Yay! Kylie thought. Now I can watch my favorite cat videos!
The second one is stronger, more direct, and clearer, and that's with only changing one of the adverbs (quietly walked to tip-toed) and just deleting the others. Even better would be to find ways of showing even more using other, stronger, words.
Here's what I mean by that:
Said quietly becomes whispered.
Walked slowly becomes strolled.
By using a single word (or a short phrase) in place of the adverb, it provides a more direct description of what's happening and makes it clearer to the reader.
This post with a giant quote from Stephen King's On Writing, where he talks dandelions in your word-garden and closing the door firmly, takes the cake. Go read it. I'll be watching Nyan Cat until you're done...
...
Back already? Good.
Oh, and like the awesome Mr. King says, for the love of Jesus on a Velociraptor, please don't use them with dialogue tags. For 99% of the time, let the dialogue communicate how someone says something. For the other 1%...well, I guess I can let it slide.
"Fine, Mom, but as soon as I'm done cleaning my room, I'm gonna watch cat videos again," Kylie said
See what I did there? I crossed out the adverb. Why? Because you don't need it. It's clear from the dialogue that Kylie is whining (you could, in theory, use "whined" as the dialogue tag instead of "said", but, again, it's not necessary--her tone is already clear to the reader, and readers aren't stupid).
There are ways around using them, too. Is it recommended? Well, that probably depends on what you're trying to accomplish with the description...
"Of course you'd want to watch cat videos instead of eating pizza with me," Jen said
"Of course you'd want to watch cat videos instead of eating pizza with me," Jen snapped.
Is it easy to tell from the dialogue that the words are said "scathingly"? Maybe, maybe not. But in cases like this, it'd be your call whether to use an adverb or not. Better yet, change "said" to "snapped" or something like I did. It's not one of those dialogue tags that's too "out there", and it effectively communicates what you're trying to get across about how Jen is saying something.
Let me also say that I'm a huge fan of adverbs...in a first draft. Mine are littered with them. But, because this is an editing how-to tip post thingy, I feel I should emphasize that I try my best to catch them and weed them out (haha, get it? Weed them out? Like dandelions? You'd get it if you read the Stephen King bit above...), replacing the adverbs with stronger language or taking them out completely. So feel free to let your first-draft garden get a bit overgrown...you'll be taking some Round-Up to it when the second draft comes along.
Are you guys finding these posts useful? What are your thoughts on adverbs? Please let me know in the comments. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Monday, September 29, 2014
To review or not to review, that is the question...
Lately I'm making an effort to be a better author-friend, so I have a little something I'd like to get off my chest...
Hello, my name is Sarah, and I was a terrible reviewer.
*waves*
*dodges rotten fruit*
Hang on, hang on, hang on! And put that squishy tomato down for God's sake...
This might not sound like much to the average person, but the thing is, book reviews by casual readers--yes, I lump myself in there as well, because I do read for pleasure--are extremely important to authors for a number of reasons.
The first reason is that we like to know someone enjoyed our book. Yes, it's that simple...if you liked a book, please review it on Amazon, B&N, iBooks, or wherever you bought it from. If anything, the author will do a little happy dance when he/she checks it out, and you know you want to be responsible for someone's happy dance.
The other reasons are more technical. Retailers use algorithms to help sell (or not sell) your books. These can be based on sales, reviews, anything that can be quantified. I'm not an expert on this kind of stuff, but I am aware of it, and that it does happen. Exactly how it works, I have no idea.
This article here and this other article here are a bit on the older side but, I think, still relevant. I'll summarize some of the main points for you, but they're worth a read (or, at least a quick skim) anyway. And yes, they're about Amazon, but please remember to review somewhere, be it the retailer you purchased from, or on Goodreads.
There's a "nutshell version" posted at the end of this, but please take the time to read it all anyway.
The number (and type!) of reviews can tell a retailer to start marketing a book. Often, writers notice that suddenly their book ends up paired with another once they reach a certain point in their reviews (be it a number, or even an average star rating...both matter!). Basically, Amazon says, "Hey, these people are really enthusiastic about this book! I'm going to pair it up with some other similar ones and/or recommend them to readers." Then Amazon "helps" market and sell your book. And the more your book sells, the more people will review...it's the law of large numbers, though, sadly, only a small percentage of readers bother to review at all. The wider the audience, the more larger the chances reviews will come in.
To put it another way if you're not sure about leaving a review for a book... I love TripAdvisor for planning trips. I scope out hotels and restaurants, reading the reviews left by consumers and visitors. What did they like? What didn't they enjoy? Were these points something I cared about, or wouldn't it matter? The same goes for books--I want to let someone else make an informed decision about something to read. And if it helps the author out too, then that's an added bonus.
So, lately, I've started to leave reviews. I don't leave long ones--I'm not a book blogger, and don't feel the need to dissect everything in the manuscript. Mine are usually a few sentences, but I will hit the high points, letting the author and other prospective readers know what I enjoyed, and what I felt was lacking. I also do my best to leave a star rating of 4+. I think, as blog post in the link at the bottom of this mentions, "Did the book deliver as advertised?", not "Was this the next Pulitzer Prize-winning novel?" and write a review based on that.
Let me explain the star ratings a bit, too, because sometimes that can be a bit fuzzy. First of all, for review purposes, Amazon really only considers 4 and 5 star ratings to be good, and will push those books more than others, even if you get a few crappy star ratings. "But what if I believe that 3 stars means "like", and I liked the book?" Well, too bad...Amazon might screw the author because of that. Think of it this way: Would I recommend it to a friend? If the answer is yes, or YES, give it 4 or 5 stars. I know a lot of people think of the star rating system like this: 1 star=hated it; 2 stars=just okay; 3 stars=liked it/book was good; 4 stars=really liked/great; 5 stars=loved/extraordinary. But Amazon doesn't think of it that way, unfortunately. Is that fair? Nope--it's inflated and decidedly unfair. So if you liked the book, please keep that in mind, at least with Amazon.
You might be thinking now, what if I came across a book I didn't like? Again, I'm not a book blogger, but I do realize that my review has a bigger impact than just telling the author that I enjoyed (or didn't) their work. Honestly, if I didn't like a book, I wouldn't review it--I feel like it would do more harm than good with the way publishing works nowadays. But if I felt compelled to write one, I'd try to find something I enjoyed about it.
So, if you'd recommend the book to a friend looking for something to read, take two minutes and write a quick review. That makes everyone happy.
Nutshell version: How many reviews you have and how good they are (typically a star rating, or average star rating), and your book ranking have an effect on how much "help" you get from retailers. So, a book with a 4.5 average star rating and/or 30 reviews will be pushed more by Amazon (or whatever retailer) than a book with a 3 average star rating and/or 10 reviews. Also, Amazon seems to think that anything under 4 stars is NOT RECOMMENDED (though it's not as bad as it used to be), so please leave a review and a good star rating and help an author out!
For some tips on reviewing on Amazon, check this post out.
How about you? Do you review? Are you like me and do it occasionally, but should do it more? What's your policy for leaving a less-than-awesome review?
xoxo Sarah
Hello, my name is Sarah, and I was a terrible reviewer.
*waves*
*dodges rotten fruit*
Hang on, hang on, hang on! And put that squishy tomato down for God's sake...
This might not sound like much to the average person, but the thing is, book reviews by casual readers--yes, I lump myself in there as well, because I do read for pleasure--are extremely important to authors for a number of reasons.
The other reasons are more technical. Retailers use algorithms to help sell (or not sell) your books. These can be based on sales, reviews, anything that can be quantified. I'm not an expert on this kind of stuff, but I am aware of it, and that it does happen. Exactly how it works, I have no idea.
This article here and this other article here are a bit on the older side but, I think, still relevant. I'll summarize some of the main points for you, but they're worth a read (or, at least a quick skim) anyway. And yes, they're about Amazon, but please remember to review somewhere, be it the retailer you purchased from, or on Goodreads.
There's a "nutshell version" posted at the end of this, but please take the time to read it all anyway.
The number (and type!) of reviews can tell a retailer to start marketing a book. Often, writers notice that suddenly their book ends up paired with another once they reach a certain point in their reviews (be it a number, or even an average star rating...both matter!). Basically, Amazon says, "Hey, these people are really enthusiastic about this book! I'm going to pair it up with some other similar ones and/or recommend them to readers." Then Amazon "helps" market and sell your book. And the more your book sells, the more people will review...it's the law of large numbers, though, sadly, only a small percentage of readers bother to review at all. The wider the audience, the more larger the chances reviews will come in.
To put it another way if you're not sure about leaving a review for a book... I love TripAdvisor for planning trips. I scope out hotels and restaurants, reading the reviews left by consumers and visitors. What did they like? What didn't they enjoy? Were these points something I cared about, or wouldn't it matter? The same goes for books--I want to let someone else make an informed decision about something to read. And if it helps the author out too, then that's an added bonus.
So, lately, I've started to leave reviews. I don't leave long ones--I'm not a book blogger, and don't feel the need to dissect everything in the manuscript. Mine are usually a few sentences, but I will hit the high points, letting the author and other prospective readers know what I enjoyed, and what I felt was lacking. I also do my best to leave a star rating of 4+. I think, as blog post in the link at the bottom of this mentions, "Did the book deliver as advertised?", not "Was this the next Pulitzer Prize-winning novel?" and write a review based on that.
Let me explain the star ratings a bit, too, because sometimes that can be a bit fuzzy. First of all, for review purposes, Amazon really only considers 4 and 5 star ratings to be good, and will push those books more than others, even if you get a few crappy star ratings. "But what if I believe that 3 stars means "like", and I liked the book?" Well, too bad...Amazon might screw the author because of that. Think of it this way: Would I recommend it to a friend? If the answer is yes, or YES, give it 4 or 5 stars. I know a lot of people think of the star rating system like this: 1 star=hated it; 2 stars=just okay; 3 stars=liked it/book was good; 4 stars=really liked/great; 5 stars=loved/extraordinary. But Amazon doesn't think of it that way, unfortunately. Is that fair? Nope--it's inflated and decidedly unfair. So if you liked the book, please keep that in mind, at least with Amazon.
| Even though this one is for video games, I'd say it's a good approximation for what to do on Amazon. |
You might be thinking now, what if I came across a book I didn't like? Again, I'm not a book blogger, but I do realize that my review has a bigger impact than just telling the author that I enjoyed (or didn't) their work. Honestly, if I didn't like a book, I wouldn't review it--I feel like it would do more harm than good with the way publishing works nowadays. But if I felt compelled to write one, I'd try to find something I enjoyed about it.
So, if you'd recommend the book to a friend looking for something to read, take two minutes and write a quick review. That makes everyone happy.
Nutshell version: How many reviews you have and how good they are (typically a star rating, or average star rating), and your book ranking have an effect on how much "help" you get from retailers. So, a book with a 4.5 average star rating and/or 30 reviews will be pushed more by Amazon (or whatever retailer) than a book with a 3 average star rating and/or 10 reviews. Also, Amazon seems to think that anything under 4 stars is NOT RECOMMENDED (though it's not as bad as it used to be), so please leave a review and a good star rating and help an author out!
How about you? Do you review? Are you like me and do it occasionally, but should do it more? What's your policy for leaving a less-than-awesome review?
xoxo Sarah
Thursday, September 25, 2014
Guest Post by Loni Lynne!
My friend and fellow author, Loni Lynne, is celebrating the release of Immortal Heat on October 6th. It's the first in The Guardians of Dacia series. She's stopping by to tell us a bit about her book!
The Guardians of Dacia Series
Even better, here's an excerpt from Immortal Heat:
The first bite hit her taste buds with the
smooth, sinful flavor of Belgian chocolate- ganache. Marilyn sighed blissfully
and closed her eyes, allowing the sweetness to pleasure her senses as she
dragged the fork through her lips to capture every last molecule of taste.
Here's a bit about Loni and her writing:
Thanks for stopping by, Loni! And if you lovely readers enjoyed the excerpt, be sure to pick up Immortal Heat, out October 6th!
xoxo Sarah
The Guardians of Dacia Series
Romania has been called the mystical
land of paranormal beings and creatures of the night. Before the Romans
conquered their land, Dacia was a mystical land of magic and folk-lore
until one man and his army destroyed the closely woven fabric set by
the gods between man and beast. Now, cursed by their gods over two thousand
years ago, one immortal clan struggles to maintain their private world while
still learning to live and protect their human brethren while their enemy seeks
power to destroy the new world.
But as the clans face extinction, a new generation of Dacian blood emerges to unite the clans once more. The world as they know it may never be the same.
But as the clans face extinction, a new generation of Dacian blood emerges to unite the clans once more. The world as they know it may never be the same.
Immortal Heat
Dacian Historian…
Determined to study ancient Dacian folk lore abroad, Marilyn Reddlin’s plans are cut short when she is abducted by a dark haired stranger who insists she’s in danger. The only danger she’s in is losing herself to her abductor’s inexplicable seductive energy. Draylon Conier teaches her there is more to Romania than myth and fairy tales while sweeping her into a wild adventure of paranormal mystery and intrigue.
Dacian History…
Thousands of years trying to pay back a debt, Draylon Conier is finally able to do so. Sent to capture a young, American student who is in danger while in Romania, he just has to send her back home. Easy enough for him. Unfortunately, Marilyn Reddlin is determined to thwart his every attempt—even telepathy. But there is more to her than meets the eye and the closer he gets to her, the more danger she is in, not only from the ancient immortal Dacian clans he’s trying to protect her from, but also his own sexual need.
History just got a lot harder.
They must find out what connection Marilyn has to Dacian history before Draylon destroys her when she succumbs to Immortal Heat.
Determined to study ancient Dacian folk lore abroad, Marilyn Reddlin’s plans are cut short when she is abducted by a dark haired stranger who insists she’s in danger. The only danger she’s in is losing herself to her abductor’s inexplicable seductive energy. Draylon Conier teaches her there is more to Romania than myth and fairy tales while sweeping her into a wild adventure of paranormal mystery and intrigue.
Dacian History…
Thousands of years trying to pay back a debt, Draylon Conier is finally able to do so. Sent to capture a young, American student who is in danger while in Romania, he just has to send her back home. Easy enough for him. Unfortunately, Marilyn Reddlin is determined to thwart his every attempt—even telepathy. But there is more to her than meets the eye and the closer he gets to her, the more danger she is in, not only from the ancient immortal Dacian clans he’s trying to protect her from, but also his own sexual need.
History just got a lot harder.
They must find out what connection Marilyn has to Dacian history before Draylon destroys her when she succumbs to Immortal Heat.
Even better, here's an excerpt from Immortal Heat:
The
server rolled out a dessert tray, and Marilyn automatically possessed room for
the piece of decadent Belgian-chocolate cake whispering her name. She couldn’t
pass up the temptation. Besides, it was only a sliver of cake. She needed
something to absorb all the wine. The rich chocolate would complement the
merlot and appease her craving.
The first bite hit her taste buds with the
smooth, sinful flavor of Belgian chocolate- ganache. Marilyn sighed blissfully
and closed her eyes, allowing the sweetness to pleasure her senses as she
dragged the fork through her lips to capture every last molecule of taste.
Upon
opening her eyes she saw a man sitting at her table, staring at her. She
inhaled a crumb of chocolate cake, setting her to cough. Marilyn tried to
breathe as her eyes watered behind her spectacles. The man handed her the water
goblet and their fingers touched. Trembling at the jolt of electricity shooting
through her hand, Marilyn took a sip to clear her throat.
She
picked up the subtle scent of the amber and musk she’d noticed in the airport.
Was it him? Was he spying on her?
He
didn’t blink. His electric blue gaze bore into her soul. Small tremors of the
fear her mother had addressed for years came running back, but she sat
immobilized, staring back at him.
Dressed
all in black, his raven hair blended in with the black leather of his jacket
and turtleneck shirt. Those blue eyes caught fire from the reflection of candle
light between them. Little bubbles of sensual awareness boiled within her
bloodstream, and her mouth went dry as if the cake she’d been eating left
behind a sawdust residue. She tried to laugh away the nervousness, but what
came out was more of a croak. “I think you have the wrong seat,” she said in
broken Romanian.
“You
have to leave,” he said.
He
spoke in perfect, modern English with a hint of accent. She wasn’t sure what
kind. You have to leave, her
mind echoed. She shook her head at the distracting sound of his voice. Like the
Belgian chocolate ganache, the thick tenor drizzled delicious intent that could
make a woman fantasize about what that voice would sound like whispering rich,
sweet words into her ear. She needed to stop drinking red wine. It made her
think silly things.
What
would her mother do in a situation like this? With the stiffened spine she’d
learned from Diane Reddlin, she met his gaze—difficult as it was to look into
his eyes without melting. “This is my table. You are the one who needs to
leave.” She took another bite of her cake as if he weren’t there. Whether the
cake was more acceptable to bite into than he was would be a matter of decorum,
but she bet he would taste yummy.
Hands
joined in a single fist planted on the table, he leaned forward until his face
was mere inches from hers. He studied her every move as she ate. The intensity
should have unnerved her, and yet a wine induced boldness hit her, coupled with
a determination to put him in his place, whoever he was. His good looks and
dark, sensual appeal could only mean trouble.
The
flickering candlelight created shadows along his jaw line, making him appear
even more mysterious. His elegant European nose flared, the muscles in his jaw
flexed. The mixed scent of the aroma she’d been alerted to at the airport and
leather from his jacket again hit her senses. As much as she tried to fight her
feminine instincts, her inner woman wasn’t cooperating. Her nipples hardened,
and a quiver started in her core. She shifted uncomfortably in her seat.
“You
are in danger, Marilyn Reddlin. Leave now. . . before it’s too late.”
Those
eyes penetrated straight through to her soul. She hoped to God he didn’t know
what her body was saying. Then his words and the fact he’d just addressed her
by her name hit her like a bucket of icy water. She shook off the strange
enchantment.
“Who
are you? How do you know my name?”
“That’s
my business. Now, leave Romania…tonight.”
Marilyn
sat stunned, fighting the commanding lilt of his voice. There was an odd,
suggestive pull. She fought it but he’d already left. She hadn’t seen him get
up. But when she looked, he’d walked out of the restaurant into the hotel lobby
towards the entrance.
A few moments later she grabbed his hand,
halting him. His eyes flared up at her, and then down to where her hand had
attached itself to his wrist. She stopped and realized she didn’t remember how she’d gotten from the table to being outside,
trying to stop his departure. But here she was. They stared at each other for a
moment, both astounded at the circumstances.
He
jerked his hand from her touch and popped the collar on his jacket, glaring at
her before walking away.
You
will leave.
Did
she just hear his voice in her mind or had he said that aloud? His back was to
her, so she wasn’t sure. She shook her head to get the sound of his voice out
of her senses. This was too bizarre.
Like
hell I’ll leave, asshole, she thought while staring after him. Who did he
think he was? Had her mother put him up to this?
Stopping
dead in his tracks, he slowly turned around. Marilyn stood her ground, her
hands fisted on her hips in defiance. Did she hear him curse? That was
impossible, his lips hadn’t moved, and they were now a parking lot away from
each other.
A
logistics truck pulled up through the circular entrance of the hotel, blocking
her view, before driving away. When the view was clear, her mystery man had
disappeared into the night, leaving only the echo of his warning behind in her
head. She walked back to the dining room puzzled over the man’s audacity.
She’d
be damned before she turned tail and ran back home to Mama.
Here's a bit about Loni and her writing:
Born
in north-central Michigan, Loni Lynne still loves the quiet woods, lakes and
rivers in Otsego County and the Victorian era bay side houses of Little
Traverse Bay. But after decades of moving around the country as a child and twenty-five
years of marriage to her personal hero, she calls western Maryland her home.
Serving
in the United States Navy didn’t prepare her for the hardest job ever, being a
stay at home mom, to her two wonderful daughters. After years of volunteering as
a scout leader, PTA officer, and various other volunteer positions, all while
still writing snippets of story ideas, her husband decided it was time for her
to put her heart to finishing a
story. He gave her a laptop, portable hard drive and his blessings to have a
finished manuscript, ready to be sent out to the masses in one year. He created
a writing monster.
Immortal Heat
was her first idea six years ago and has gone through many revisions since
then. In the meantime another story took hold, Wanted: One Ghost
and it became her first published book in 2013. Now with the help of her
friends, family and friends of the romance writing community, she’s pursuing
her love of telling stories written from her heart.
Amazon
Page for Immortal Heat, Book 1 of The Guardians of Dacia series:
http://www.amazon.com/Immortal-Heat-Guardians-Dacia-Book-ebook/dp/B00NHDED50/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1410880327&sr=8-1&keywords=Immortal+Heat
Facebook
Page for The Guardians of Dacia series: https://www.facebook.com/TheGuardiansofDacia
Loni
Lynne’s website: http://www.lonilynne.com
Loni
Lynne’s Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/lonilynne
Loni
Lynne’s Twitter Page: https://twitter.com/LoniLynne1
Loni
Lynne’s Goodread Page: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/7115619.Loni_Lynne
Thanks for stopping by, Loni! And if you lovely readers enjoyed the excerpt, be sure to pick up Immortal Heat, out October 6th!
xoxo Sarah
Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Interview Time with Jennyfer Browne!
Since apparently I'm on a mission to have as many lovely ladies--and creative versions of "Jennifer"--as possible on my blog, here's another one. Jennyfer Browne is the author in a genre not many are aware of--Amish romance. But she doesn't play by the rules, and writes it how she wants...and it's good.
See for yourself.
Tell everyone
about yourself and how you got started in writing!
I’ve
always had my head in the clouds, thinking up stories to entertain myself. My
best friend and I used to play Star Wars- which can probably be considered live
action fan fiction- she always got Han *SAD FACE*. I started writing early,
first poetry, and then epic fantasy of a teenager soaking up Tolkien and Terry
Brooks. And always with a strong, though often suffering heroine.
What are your
favorite and least favorite parts about being a writer?
My
favorite parts are being able to share something from the heart with those that
enjoy it ( yay awesome readers!). My least favorite parts? Never having enough
time and having a deadline.
What’s one piece
of advice you’d give to other writers?
Write
every day- whether it is on the manuscript you are working on or simple short
exercises to keep your brain and fingers trained. Even if you have a writer's
block- dedicate yourself to the time- even if it is to simply write:
“nothingnothingnothingnothingomgthisisterriblenothingnothing”
I've definitely had those days. And do you prefer
silence or to have music on when you’re writing? What kind?
I
love music while I write. And I love all kinds- I have a few playlists to help
with the mood (Angry, angsty, sad, inspiring). It all depends on the mood and
sometimes I will play the same song over and over for one single chapter.
How’d you get
the idea for the In Your World series?
In
Your World started out as an online chat session with some girlfriends over a
celebrity photo shoot in which he appeared with a black hat and innocent face. Jokingly
calling him Amish, the inspiration struck and I had the first four chapters
written in a day. A lot of research following once I realized I knew very
little about the Amish save my childhood jaunts to Lancaster.
For readers
who’ve never read in this genre, what sets the IYW series apart from a lot of
Amish romances? How is it similar?
IYW
can better be labeled contemporary romance, with an Amish twist. I like to call
it sweet and savory with a twist of tart, as it does have a little more spice
to it than typical Amish fiction reads. It is more secular in its approach as
it is from an English (non Amish) person’s perspective. It is still meant to be
respectful of the culture and philosophies of the Amish, illustrating the
meaning of love between two people in a world that would see to tarnish it.
Will there be a
3rd IYW book?
Most
definitely! Initally I had planned on simply two, but in finding titles for the
first two, the verse from 1 Corinthians 13 stuck:
And now these three remain: faith, hope
and love. But the greatest of these is love.
So felt it was important to round out the series
with Finding Love- which is the story of the young Bishop, Benjamin Yoder. I’m
very excited to give him more life and rejoin with characters we have all
followed in the last two books.
Your covers are
lovely! Did you do them yourself? If so, how’d you do them?
Aw, thank you so much! I did do them myself- which was a huge undertaking and
provides me with so much admiration for those create covers professionally. I
was a bit of a control freak for the first book, and I wanted a very particular
image of Nathan (of which my friend and model, Brian helped to make a
reality!). Hours and hours of learning the basics of Photoshop ( you can
download it free for 30 days and get it done!)- and InDesign for the formatting
of the cover. A
great learning experience but my next series I am definitely hiring out!
What made you
decide to self-pub?
This
series was going to be a tough sell- what with the sexual situations that are
not found in Inspirational Romance. I didn’t want to delete those moments,
though, as I feel that love and sensuality are a beautiful thing and shouldn’t
necessarily become a Fade To Black. I had an interested publisher but there was
talk of shrinking it to one book, and that scared me.
Self-pubbing is a lot of work- in that you can decide to do all your own formatting
cover, and even editing if you choose. My advice if you choose to go with self-pubbing and you don’t have a lot of funding- put it into editing. You can never
see all the errors you make in writing!
What are you
working on now?
Finishing
up Finding Love, with the hope to publish in November (another boon/curse to
self pubbing- you can pick your publish date!). After that I have a series of
contemporary New Adults I want to start. And an alien romance. And a vampire
romance. LOL
Tell us what
genre(s) you write in, why, and what your experiences are like writing in them. If you write in multiple genres, how is the
experience different from one to another?
I
love to write in a few genres- Paranormal, Sci fi, New Adult- but of them all,
I want a strong female lead. The tone changes- paranormal has that feeling of
danger or suspense, New Adult can be more comedic, and Sci Fi can be a free for
all. But the heroine has to be strong, even when she is in danger of losing it
all.
What was your
favorite scene to write in the IYW books? Why?
Oooh!
Favorite scene had to be Kate’s first encounter with Magnus. I love that horse.
What scene gave
you the most trouble in the IYW books? Why?
The
sensual scenes were the most difficult. Initially they were a little more
brazen- but given the audience targeted- a bridge between bodice rippers and
Christian fiction, I had to really evaluate what was going too far and what was
censoring. To some, I still have gone too far, but I stand by the words and
their intent- that love between two people and how they show it is beautiful
when they respect one another.
Where can we
find you on the interwebs?
My
Blog: jennyferbrowne.wordpress.com
My
twitter: twitter.com/jennyferbrowne
Facebook
Author Page: www.facebook.com/jennyferbrowneauthor
Where can we
find your books?
On
AMAZON
On
iTunes
Thanks for stopping by, Jennyfer! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Thursday, September 18, 2014
Interview Time with Jen DeLucy!
Today we have the amazing Jennifer DeLucy, author of the three books of The Light Series, which is getting a serious cover make-over AND a box set! Woot woot! Maybe, if we're good, she'll even let us see the pretty new covers...
Take it away, Jen!
Tell everyone a bit about yourself.
Oh,
man. This question. When I was younger I could have come up with this whole
thoughtful answer that seemed completely authentic, but, the truth is, nowadays
I’d say I’m this woman constantly growing into and out of her skin. In other
words, I have no idea! It keeps changing. I guess I’m someone with feelings to
express.
What are your
favorite and least favorite parts about being a writer?
Favorite
parts? Falling into a story so that I can’t break away and want to write
constantly. Also, seeing it published and hearing from readers about their
shared experience. Least favorite? Pushing past writer’s block. Keeping the
faith when success is slow coming.
What’s one piece
of advice you’d give to other writers?
This
much has never changed: DO NOT STOP WORKING. It may take you a decade to become
known or successful. If writing really does bring you satisfaction and it’s all
you really picture yourself doing, then you aren’t allowed to give up. You can
whine, you can cry and throw things, but do not stop writing new things. It’s
the only way you’ll become a better writer and beat the odds.
Do you prefer
silence or to have music on when you’re writing?
Silence.
I can’t concentrate very well when music is on, but only because I love music
so much that it distracts me. I tend to listen to my musical inspirations
before and after writing sessions to keep in the mood.
I’m
super-excited that The Light Series is getting a make-over! Can you tell us how
much input you had in the new covers? What’s the process like?
I
had a very heavy influence in the new covers. My publisher worked with me
closely, giving me guidance and opinions, but allowing me to pick and choose a lot
of the way. The process was super easy when we came down to it. It was the last
five years of my aversion to characters on the covers that made me put the
whole thing off. But it was just time now, I guess, because it fell together
easily for all parties.
Can we get a
peek? Pretty please?
You
can. :-) Here’s a glimpse of the box set. It’s not the full size covers, but, it’s
enough to wet the palette.
That's gorgeous! And how’d you get
the idea for The Light Series?
Well,
I was obsessed with Harry Potter. (Still adore that series with all my heart.)
And I’m also a huge paranormal fan. I love scary things. I’m also pretty
spiritual, though, and think there are a lot of plausibilities in this
mysterious universe that we can only imagine. So I just wrote from my head and
heart what I felt was (mostly) possible if the supernatural and the natural
world were the same, with all sorts of creepy and cool things existing among
humans with special abilities. I didn’t overthink it initially. I just wrote
and learned about their world as I went.
Okay, I have to
ask…are YOU a bigger fan of Christian or William? Why?
Ooooookay.
Okay, okay! Hah. I promised people I’d answer this question, but I hate to,
because I don’t want anybody to think my love is unevenly distributed among my
mains. Alas, however…sure, I’ve got a favorite. It’s William. There. I said it.
Just a little above Christian, for me. And the reason is simple: He’s exactly
the kind of man who would challenge my character without making me feel any
less for it. He’d force me to be the strongest version of myself. And though
that would be harder, I think it’s a good thing.
I love it! And it's okay to have favorites. :-) Which one of the
series was your favorite to write?
Which
book, you mean? Ugh. It’s tough. Seers has the most magic in it, for me,
because I was just getting to know the characters and the world, and I was
falling in love for the first time, but Circle
was super cool to write, as well, because my writing abilities were amped up by
then. My writing and storytelling were far better. Plus I got to research other
countries. But, I’d say Seers, because you can’t beat the magic of your first
love.
What are you
working on now?
I’m
working on a book called “Beautiful”, about a very unorthodox protagonist.
That’s all I’ll say for now. :-)
Tell us what
genres you write in, why, and what your experiences are like writing
paranormal romance for The Light Series.
How is the experience different from
one genre to another?
I
don’t hold myself to any one genre, though I prefer paranormal. The book I’m
working on now is contemporary, actually. My experience writing The Light
Series was about as beautiful as I could have imagined. There’s just something
about the mystery of the unknown and supernatural that feeds my soul. I’ll
always love paranormal.
I’d
say the main difference between paranormal and contemporary writing is that you
have to really work hard to keep the plot interesting in a contemporary book
without the novelty and fun of supernatural elements. And to write paranormal,
you need to be able to suspend your own disbelief and let your imagination run
rampant. You also have to be able to make up an entirely new set of rules that
somehow feel believable to readers, where contemporary novels lend themselves
to the reality we already know, so they’re easier in that way.
What was your
favorite scene to write in The Light Series books? Why?
Good
Lord…These questions are hard! Can’t I pick a scene from each book? Please? I’m
going to say, in Seers of Light, it’s one of the initial training scenes
between Lily and William. In Whisper of Light, maybe the grocery shopping scene
with Nicole and Christian, and in Circle…I believe the scene involves potatoes.
What scene gave
you the most trouble? Why?
I
think in Whisper of Light, any scene with Nicole and her dad was tough, just
because it was hard to muster the kind of animosity his character put forward,
but it was necessary.
Where can we
find you on the interwebs?
My blog: http://jenniferdelucy.blogspot.com/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/Jen_DeLucy
Where can we
find your books?
Simon and
Schuster: http://authors.simonandschuster.com/Jennifer-DeLucy/488327689
Barnes and
Noble: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/c/jennifer-delucy
Sweet! Thank you so much for being awesome, Jen!
Please go check out Jen's books...they're just as wonderful as she is.
xoxo Sarah
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